Thank you for your comment, we are very glad to see our writing has inspired such thoughts and ideas.
With regards to Prometheus and his connection to Melinoe and the Unseen, we have our own plans for his character and we do not need any additional collaborators at this time.
Always happy to hear feedback, especially from people who have interesting ideas.
While it's a little disappointing that Prometheus won't have a big role, it's fine.
As for my thoughts on Chapter 3 (since it's Chapter 2, it goes without saying again). I kind of like Melinoe's trauma-inducing actions, as it shows she's not invincible or a Mary Sue. So it'll be interesting to see how she slowly regains her will to fight. If I may make a suggestion, a good addition would be for Melinoe to feel that her fight was in part for nothing because now the family of her relatives on Olympus wants to kill her, making her question why she did everything she did. When maybe she should have cared more about her family in the Underworld instead of Olympus.
I don't know if I'm the only one. But there were times when I felt Melinoe appreciated the Olympian gods more than the family she never knew of the Underworld.
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