Comment on Original Sin: Mea Culpa, Mea Maxima Culpa

  1. moanikaneedssalvation on Chapter 1 Wed 22 Oct 2025 09:13AM UTC

    Everyone around Dokja failed him in the end. That his life is a common tragedy, breaks you even more.

    And then there's Yoo Joonghyuk...

    > This introduction is only around 400 words but already you broke my heart with this

    I'm glad you felt this way. I really am happy I'm able to convey Kim Dokja's plight, his pain through my words. Also, I tried my hand in brevity, inspired by Sam. Hope I did well. :3

    > I'm very interested in how you would interpret the reader & protagonist relationship!! :D

    It's gonna go a lil more toxic but I'm trying to stick to canon when it comes to their actions; it's just that the emotions brewing would be... Interesting to dissect.

    Thank you for reading :3

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