Comment on Original Sin: Mea Culpa, Mea Maxima Culpa

  1. Nods. Kdj's mannerisms slipping out in this chapter. The way he hyper-fixates on Yjh's body. Excellent.

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    1. Yessssssssssssssss I wanted to show the slow descent into an extreme for Kim Dokja, and the way that he rationalises and thinks it's normal. I love adding Kim Dokja-isms here and there, it's so fun to write that way.

      Thank you for reading, Mochi!

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