Comment on Naruto: Sage Verse.

  1. Oroborous on Chapter 1 Sun 26 Oct 2025 04:13AM UTC

    Consider rewriting this.

    You have a 11-y.o kid with stunted social skills keeping his cool and talking like an adult woth the next best thing to satan in his hometown.

    I don't mind the sequence of events, but Naruto shouldn't be as eloquent nor as calm, as an 11-y.o kid.

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    1. Zach67 on Chapter 1 Sun 26 Oct 2025 04:59AM UTC

      I understand what you are saying, but there is a reason I did it that way. You are correct in that a normal kid wouldn't act that way, but my version of Naruto is far from normal and has more than the Nine Tails inside him affecting his maturity, intelligence, and yes, even his sense of calm.
      I appreciate the comment though and the advice, if you read to chapter 5 or so you will understand by what i meant above.

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