Comment on Lumiose's Horizon Is Fraught With Perils

  1. Orangeup on Chapter 2 Sun 02 Nov 2025 01:15AM UTC

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    Wow this fic just started but I'm already hooked, makes sense tho since it has two pairings I'm super into.

    I like Dorian(I'm assuming he's a surrogate Paxton) seems charming in his own way.

    Yall know everyone thinks Kieran is Corbeaus son right now scaring everyone inadvertently.

     

    Honestly if Kieran was to get a pokemon that's not already apart of his team to join, I'd bet a leg on either Falinks or Greninja

    Juliana strikes me as maybe getting a Froslass or Victrebell

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    1. KaigaKensei on Chapter 2 Tue 04 Nov 2025 10:06AM UTC

      Thanks! It is my first fic ever, so I'm just trying to make sure you readers are kept on your toes and enjoy!

      If you're curious, Dorian's supposed to be an amalgamation of OC, my playthrough of ZA (as in certain parts of the story are side missions from the game I played) and also another game from the Pokemon franchise. I'll leave you to guess which one.

      Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm-

      Curious choice! Greninja is ninja-esque, which could benefit his more rogue battle-style, or he could just find it very cool. Falinks on the other hand could imply his new ability for teamwork.

      Juliana would absolutely get a Victreebel upon realising how goofy its Mega Evo is. Froslass could also do well, not to mention I've seen many people compare it to a G-Max; that would feel quite at home with her

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      1. Orangeup on Chapter 2 Tue 04 Nov 2025 06:03PM UTC

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        Tbh falinks is mainly due to my love of Falinks

        I love those goobers, up there with Oshawott and Venipede for me

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