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  1. simplords (maeora) on Chapter 4 Fri 07 Nov 2025 10:44PM UTC

    这条评论是我自己翻译成中文的，如果有哪里怪怪的，请多包涵！🥹

    我超喜欢你写的雷米在艾弗里的派对上装作不认识她那段！游戏里他从来不在农场外提起主角，这点一直挺怪的——他记忆不会真有那么差吧 😂
    还有你写他因为之前的逃跑事件就和半人马断了联系、甚至怀疑牛奶是不是她产的，这些细节真的太棒了。让她叫艾弗里“爸爸”那段也写得超好，看他那反应就能想象以后她生下孩子后他会怎么想，太心酸了 🥺

    另外我也特别喜欢你笔下的雷米，比贝利更冷血，但还能装出一副“关心孕妇”的样子，结果只是为了赚钱。两个人真是一丘之貉 😭

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    1. vespera1314 on Chapter 4 Sat 08 Nov 2025 03:40AM UTC

      Wow, welcome Maeora (I hope it's okay to call you that)! 🤩 Thank you so much for your support! ☺️

      I've always found it strange how Remy seems not to recognize PC, yet the moment she's captured and brought back to the farm, he immediately knows who she is. This makes me think Remy is just pretending not to know her in front of others.I refuse to believe his memory is that bad. I'm glad you appreciate these subtle details!

      I also think that after being captured a second time, escaping should be much more difficult for PC—especially now that she's pregnant.

      As for Avery, before the game updates, I was really hoping for pregnancy-related content involving him. It's a shame it wasn't added. As an upper-class elite who has explicitly stated he doesn't want children, the dynamic between him and PC during a pregnancy would be incredibly tense—whether he acts like a jerk or a gentleman.

      I'm happy you like Remy too, but honestly, I can't imagine him being tender or developing feelings for PC 😂. In my mind, his moral standards are even lower than Bailey's.

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      1. simplords (maeora) on Chapter 4 Sun 09 Nov 2025 02:55AM UTC

        Of course you can call me maeora :) - I agree with Remy pretending not to know her in front of other people, but for what purpose? Idk, just seems like a bit of an oversight by the devs so they don't have to incorporate all the history/dialogue (but it really is immersion-breaking!)

        Me too regarding the Avery pregnancy content - like he canonically makes weird comments (like him not even recognising his own child) and even punches PC in the stomach when she's pregnant. I think you portrayed Avery's potential reaction to pregnancy well.

        Poor PC, she needs to find someone not crazy, but she's a magnet for heartless beasts like Avery, Remy, and Bailey. It's a shame that the heart wants what the heart wants.

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