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  1. abigail Ivy (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Nov 2025 03:32PM UTC

    I like how Abaddon brings this strange humor and curiosity to such a dark moment. It’s a good contrast. Did you intend for him to lighten the tone or is he meant to challenge Hunter’s view of demons?

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    1. Flapjacksz on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Nov 2025 06:03PM UTC

      He’s gonna lighten up in later chapters, but him challenging hunters view of demons a little bit would of been interesting, if I had thought of that lol

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      1. Abigail ivy (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Nov 2025 07:19PM UTC

        Thanks for explaining! I loved the way he contrasts with the darkness. I came up with a little idea while reading, want me to share?

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        1. Flapjacksz on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Nov 2025 08:21PM UTC

          Sure

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          1. Abigail ivy (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Nov 2025 09:04PM UTC

            Great! I’d love to explain it in detail so it fits naturally with how you’ve set up that contrast. Would it be easier if I shared it over email, Instagram, or X? That way I can go through it clearly.

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