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  1. TuttiWrites on Chapter 3 Tue 11 Nov 2025 01:43PM UTC

    Hahaha, gotta start the chapter off on a fun line, right?

    Yup, compared to Briar, ol’ Peachy here is as tame as Susanna’s pet Sqwovet. (And hey, that puppeteer reference is a nod to its Pokedex entry too!)

    Thank you! I felt like the original myth didn’t do the madness this little guy causes justice. Adding a little flair is fun~

    Indeed, the poison is a bit more literal than you expect, Arvie.

    HE IS! Look at our boy, getting more confident in love! We love to see it 🥰

    Thank you!! That is a huge compliment. The Paldea Trio are so fun and distinct, so I’m glad I’m doing them justice!

    There’s love involved here, but not the romantic kind. Without spoiling too much for the next chapter, Arven’s sense of stability is being threatened hard by Kieran’s presence (at least in his mind). He thinks that something very important to him is at risk of disappearing, thus the uh, INTENSE emotional reaction. More on that next chapter. 😇

    THANK YOU! Fleshing out these aspects was a very intentional choice here. It felt very rushed to me to resolve Arven’s jealousy in canon - this guy is not about to drop that grudge so quickly. He’s as stubborn as his Mabosstiff, so you KNOW he’s got big feelings about this situation.
    And as much as I love the silly intro in-game, I wanted to set the tone for the future battle with Pecharunt as something to take seriously by setting up the first appearance with some thrills and chills.

    Hehehe, why thank you! The chicken dance thing is delightfully silly in canon, and it made me laugh out loud seeing it happen when I played the epilogue. It felt wrong just to toss it in as a one-off reference without making it just a wee bit spooky~
    (And now making Carmi’s iconic two-handed wave terrifying too!)

    Haaaa, it would be hilarious if that was Hydrapple’s name. “Koiyo!” translates to mean “Bring it on!” as best as I found in my research. Basically he’s telling Pecharunt to come at me bro. 🤣

    Terrifying peach creature appearance, check. ✅

    LOOOOL, Yukito let his hair grow out again, didn’t he? Tbh I could see people doing a double take when they were younger if Yukito let his hair stay long. They probably would have met in the 70s, which would track. Hmmm… I can work with that. 💡
    But thank you truly, it’s fixed now. 💜

    Huzzah!!! I am glad it all went so well! Brava, Adeline! 💐👏

    Ooo I am seated and listening. 🍿

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    1. AdelineSariana (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sun 16 Nov 2025 09:10PM UTC

      I love how everyone who knows about the Eavesdropper-verse looks at Briar and goes, “Fun Fact: *pulls out a gun* You have 5 minutes.”

      Tutti skipped the love triangle and wrote a friendship triangle, albeit a less infuriating one. Julie’s not caught between lovers.

      Not Kieran telling Pecharunt “Square up!” In the form of his Hydrapple.

      Normally, I’m not the type of person to correct people’s grammar. Sometimes I might notices a few errors here and there, and while they bug me, they don’t affect the reading experience that much. Other times (Like the infamous “Chapter 18: The Departure” incident) I know I have to mention the problem. This one was right in the middle of the spectrum.

      Thanksss! I’m really burnt out from this week, especially since I’m also falling sick (Wow, guess the Ao3 Curse can spread to readers of the fics as well).

      I might discuss a bit about HHIEOY next comment. I don’t know if I will or if I should talk about it next chapter.

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      1. TuttiWrites on Chapter 3 Mon 17 Nov 2025 03:15AM UTC

        FACTS! Briar is a pure menace in my universe.

        Correct! I ain’t here for love triangles, I am here for these kids processing their traumas and talking things out.

        Apple vs. peach, and my money is on the apple. 🍎

        Understandable. Sometimes, Exhausted Author Brain misses a few important things in editing. 😅

        Oh nooooo! Rest well and feel better soon.
        And at your discretion, of course!

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        1. AdelineSariana (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sat 22 Nov 2025 12:38AM UTC

          Finally, I get to yap more about random stories I’m writing that double as my current hyperfixations!

          So a basic overview of History Has Its Eyes On You: It’s basically inspired by my playthrough of Pokemon Shield (which was like 4-5 years ago), however, the story is rewritten to be a lot more…better (just to clarify, I didn’t rewrite the story. It was inspired by a video titled "Rewriting Pokemon Sword and Shield” by Fudj, albeit with a few minor changes. I highly recommend it).

          And with that out of the way, let’s get to our main character!

          So, let’s get this straight. The concept of Gloria? Get outta here! No swearing
          Scottish girls on my watch. I don’t do that around here (and besides, the censors would kill me if I did). Instead, I have Julia Skye (This isn’t gonna get confusing at all…), the new main character of HHIEOY. Design-wise, she has the same preset outfit as Gloria, along with her hair color (brown); however, her hair is longer, fluffier, and styled in a ponytail. Her eyes are brown, and her skin is light brown. Teamwise, her final team going up against Leon consists of Cinderace (Ruby Red), Shiny Weavile (Mistral), Polteagiest (Teatime), Alcreamie (Tiremisu), Galarian Rapidash (Celestial), and Corviknight (Jester), modeled after my team (and slightly adjusted, due to me not remembering most of my team).

          Writing her personality was the fun part. Being the protagonist, of course, she’s very passionate and would be willing to help anyone in need. However, she can also be quite doubtful of herself and often blames herself even if it wasn’t her fault. But even with that, whatever you do, do NOT mess with her friends, ESPECIALLY Hop. She’ll have the wrath of ten Tera Starstorms if you do!

          She’s also quite the fashionista, often changing up her outfits throughout the story. One day, she’s wearing the pink dress and gray sweater given to you at the beginning of the game, the next, an expensive shiny dress and fuzzy sweater from Circhester boutique, then a pink long-sleeve sweater and white skirt from Wedgehurst boutique, and even some outfits exclusive to the DLC. Girl’s got that style card!

          When it come to friends, Julia really only has one: Hop, of course! Hop’s been her friend since childhood, and it really shows. Julia and Hop even bring up when they found a Gastly in the shallow parts of the Slumbering Wield on Halloween at one point (referencing a story I wrote about them for an assignment). Julia’s also there for Hop during his mild depression though season 1 and 2, comforting him, unlike the MC, who is pretty much just a statue who only knows how to smile (I’ll discuss more about Hop and Julia’s relationship in the next explaination of HHIEOY).

          When it come to her involvement in the story, great news is: She actually does stuff instead of Leon just doing the plot offscreen! This is mainly because the entire plot got an overhaul and there's no more energy crisis plotline, because that whole thing was dumb.

          And…that’s really all I can say about Julia. She’s a bit underbaked, but I think I can develop her a bit more. I’m planning on practicing her design a bit more, along with some other characters.

          Anyways, let me know what you think about Julia and the SwSh rewrite! 🩷💛🩷

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          1. TuttiWrites on Chapter 3 Sat 22 Nov 2025 04:47AM UTC

            Oho, this is a great start!
            Julia has got personality AND style, loving that already. And yes, I support her defending Hop to the death. He is a certified Good Guy and deserves love.
            Oh thank Arceus at the plot change as well, the energy crisis plotline fell flat imo too.

            This is shaping up to be quite an exciting tale! You’ve got the plans, and I know you can make them come to life. You got this! ✨💜

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