Firstly, I want to say that this fic is absolutely awesome, I love your writing style and everything feels so realistic! Secondly, I understand that Y/N's motives are fitting for the time period this is set in (yk with the whole "a woman needs to find a husband"-stuff), but in my opinion it's a bit overdone. Maybe it's just because I'm aromantic but I feel like she's thinking too much about marriage and doesn't really have other motivations. All in all, I love the story but I think that Y/N lacks some more motivations for her life. Keep up the great work! :)
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Starry_Spaceship on Chapter 3 Wed 26 Nov 2025 08:00AM UTC
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