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  1. Listen. *Listen*.

    I know this took your time and effort to write. Your blood, swear and tears if you will. But I want you to know I spend up till 2:30 am reading the whole thing cuz I could not put it down and I wanted to say both thank you and sorry I devoured this. It was so sweet and they were so dumb and good for mingyu for being the smartest person in the room and having the opportunity to rub that in jungkook's face for the next forever. Namjoon calling jungkook baby sent me as much as it probably sent kookie, but also like, kookie elbowing that dude at the end was chef kiss ans namjoon was right to say it was hit. 10 out 10.

    I love that you included jungkook and yoongi's talk and had jungkook say not only thank you to his brother, but also like, acknowledge that his brother loves him and he knows and appreciates him. It was such a sweet moment and such a great move on your part to make the story more like, rounded? Give them all more depth? You could have left yoongi as a plot device that kept them apart but you made his relationship with kookie so much more real with that little scene, and jist their interactions in general were fun.

    Jung Hoseok MVP.

    Thank you for writing this ❤️

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    1. Listen! It truly means a lot to me when people just can't put something I wrote down, so know that this comment has made me very happy! Love all your highlights for your favorite bits! And yeah, it was important to me to have that convo between yoonkook, otherwise all this drama wouldn't make much sense, would it? Thank you so much for complimenting that and for all of your words! JUNG HOSEOK MVP! Thank you for reading!

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