Beyond (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Sun 30
Nov 202505:42PM UTC
OK. This story is MY new obsession! Also little side note, NO DISRESPECT! I can see your first language is Spanish, you have a few mistakes in personal pronouns and the plural and singular forms. English is also not my first language, I'd like someone to correct me if I made a mistake but that's completely up to you. Lots of Love Beyond ❤️
I’m glad you liked it, I hope the rest will be also of your liking🥰. And jeez, i had hope that it wasn’t written that bad. English its confusing for me, I’ve never been teach the gramatical rules. In my country the teaching is more focused on conversations. If you could specify the errors (or at least the biggest ones) I would appreciate it a lot. If not, its ok 👍.
Comment on My Obssesion
Beyond (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sun 30 Nov 2025 05:42PM UTC
Comment Actions
Wowo09 on Chapter 1 Sun 30 Nov 2025 08:23PM UTC
Comment Actions