So gooooood, i loved reading this, i was hooked! Also i agree that Rafayel is terrifying, you portray him so well, i often forget he is a predator who often refers MC as “prey” because he is so good at playing the yappy innocent artist.
Thank you! Rafayel is so fun to write because he has lines like "what a coinkidink" and "come get your fishie dinner!" while his anecdotes are all "He murdered someone with his voice, he sank a sub for grabbing lemurian artifacts."
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