Very well written and you really portrayed how scared and out of place she feels. Like even basic technology would be a shock. Nevermind thinking in how to pay bills. And realistic that she isn't a fighter so she can't help Caleb or really do her job.
It must be terrifying.
The date as well - shock for her as she's in an au world and in the future and for Zayne she's obviously has something wrong with her.
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summer164 on Chapter 1 Fri 05 Dec 2025 10:12AM UTC
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Balidoria on Chapter 1 Fri 05 Dec 2025 10:29PM UTC
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