this is so wonderful i have so much to say, ok first i love no hale fire deeply because well i love everyone lives lol but past that, i was also bothered that we never saw how deep and intericate the hale pack was beyond a few moments in season 3a and i love how well off and structured they are because it's a show of their history and ancestry. I lowkey never really like the narrative pushed that all werewolves live in the forest away from civilzation for no reason and weren't established in society, because they have to still have semi-ordinary lives as they interact with humans very often, and having a large community makes it easier to build a foundation and legacy, etc. anyways I loved how deeply derek feels for his family and them towards him. I feel so much empathy for him and sadness that he was taken from his family pack that way, not having anyone to rely on anymore, getting cut off from the only thing he's ever known and the same for him family having to feel his bond severed from them sigh my heart cant take it omg. I also love how you are using oc's + other characters in the story so well and what their roles are in becaon hills. I'm sad stiles has no family really left but his character break down is so wonderful, espeically with how hostile he is towards derek (like he is to others in the og series) and how he is kinda the pillar of the pack, and it goes beyond him being his mom's only child, but it's like they each love him deeply for their own reasons. this was a long ass comment but I just love how this is written and where everything is going to far and you are doing such a good job on this fic!!!
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SweetDino on Chapter 6 Mon 08 Dec 2025 10:14AM UTC
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