This is a lovely start! I love your writing, and I find the chapter very intriguing. Akainu is the absolute worst, and I truly hate him! I feel so bad for Luffy and the crew, but I am so relieved that Law is with Luffy to find the One Piece! Time travel stories are my favourite! Seeing Luffy back at Party's Bar with Shanks is such a great nostalgic moment!
Anyway, before I go, everything I have read so far is perfectly clear, understandable, and beautifully written! As English is not my first language either, I shall cheer you on extra loudly! I am going to dive into the next chapter right now!
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