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  1. Holy hell, this was awesome! The tension and building sense of dread is very well done. I particularly loved the opening scene with Sniper. Your characterization of him and everyone else is *chef's kiss*, as usual!

    I look forward to seeing more!

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    1. GEHEHE THANK YOU!! God I love writing horror/suspense. And I'm glad my characterization continues to hit home :]

      I spent this morning doing my bulk edits of the next chapter, so after I sit on it for a bit and do a second pass, it should be up later today!!

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