Comment on Vices

  1. teruteruboozu on Chapter 1 Fri 23 Jun 2017 03:39PM UTC

    Hi! <3 This is bunnybunnychan, from tumblr.

    I haven't had an opportunity to provide permanent comments up until now, so thank you so much for putting this up on AO3. I really enjoy how you established the start of everything in this chapter. The tension between both Ignis and Noct is very palpable and real, but you wrote it in a way that shows it in comparison to making it overwhelmingly obvious. Also, I enjoy that you put just enough detail into your writing to paint a clear picture of everything that is happening, but you don't go overboard. This is the chapter that got me hooked! <3

    I'll keep adding my comments from chapter to chapter, but it might take me some time. I want to recall all of the details I had really enjoyed in the beginning and at a re-read perspective as well. Hope that's OK!

    Have a great day, and take care!

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    1. kickcows on Chapter 1 Fri 23 Jun 2017 05:12PM UTC

      Oh, thank goodness!! :GLOMPS YOU: Thank you for telling me who you are from tumblr!!! ❤

      As soon as I knew I was 'ending' it, I made the decision to post it up on here because I like that it will be easy to read from start to finish. LOL. It was a new thing I was trying on tumblr, and I think I will stick with it for the next parts of this AU. :')

      (/o\) You're so kind with your words about my characterizations of both Ignis and Noct. Even though this story begins in the middle, I am glad that it hooked you from the get-go. It's so funny too, because the image that my friend sent, I had started to write it as a one-shot set in the Brotherhood timeline. Got about 1k into it and went 'NOPE', and scrapped it, and instead 'Vices' was born. I'm glad that it worked. :D

      Please keep adding. I have no problem with that. You won't sound repetitive either. I promise. I love hearing your thoughts on how it all plays out. :')

      Thanks so much for your review, bunny!! (´∀｀)♡

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