Comment on Escaping the future

  1. kiki8o on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Apr 2026 11:18PM UTC

    This person, we don't know the name, age or sex.

    And you called them a boy last chapter and on this chapter you called them a character, even you are confused.

    I know it's on the tags, but maybe you should give the character more depth.

    I don't know just my opinion

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    1. Yeeeeeh on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Apr 2026 12:04AM UTC

      I used the word "child" because it evokes a sense of diminished maturity in the reader; I thought that by doing so, I could convey that the readers are no longer adults and have genuinely adopted the mindset of a child I also made a mistake in using the word "character." I'm currently working on another fanfiction, so I must have mixed it up. Using translation tools might also have had an effect I appreciate your feedback and will correct the errors as soon as possible

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