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  1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 24 Jul 2017 05:13PM UTC

    So Seifer isn't a bad Guy!!so great! Sorry i took a long Time to understand...-_-

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    1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 24 Jul 2017 05:52PM UTC

      Oh it's no worries!! Thank you!! Yeah I wanted Seifer to be a good guy, though he's still an ass. All he wants to do it protect Zell!

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      1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 24 Jul 2017 06:02PM UTC

        So the scar that Seifer has...it's Zell who did it, right ? I understand better now...good job

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        1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 24 Jul 2017 06:07PM UTC

          Yup! Zell doesn't know he did it though, he was confused and drugged at the time. Seifer will call him out on it though. Very soon!

          Thank you again for all the support! It truly means a lot and it keeps me going!

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          1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 07:52PM UTC

            ...fuck Kadowaki !!
            Fucking bitch ! What's wrong with her? Why didn't she help him?? I hope Seifer would cut her fucking throat!
            Sorry for swearing but it's so unfair...

            Last Edited Mon 14 Aug 2017 07:52PM UTC

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            1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 10:32PM UTC

              I promise that Dr.Kadowaki will be getting punished and very soon. She's a horrible woman.

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              1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:03PM UTC

                I hope she will!!
                But I have to confess that i would like to see Zell more strong...i mean he is a good fighter so unless he has got caught in gangrape all the time i wish to see him defend himself...

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                1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:08PM UTC

                  This Zell had a hard life, but you'll soon see why Zell is weak. The long await Adonis will make his appearance soon. But remember there are rules to being in the servitude program. So he can't risk fighting with people or he will be punished.

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                  1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:12PM UTC

                    I understand for his situation now but what about when he was at the garden? Couldn't he have fought back when he was everyone's whore? But if you tell me there is a reason for this all i have to do now is to wait for the next chapter...

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                    1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:27PM UTC

                      I know I'm horrible. I don't know why I decided to write such a depressing story. Hopefully by the end of this Zell will become stronger.

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                      1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:39PM UTC

                        You read too many sad stories for sure (mine too?) So it's contagious XD
                        I hope for you that Zell would be stronger or you would make me sad...don't make me sad...please

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                        1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:47PM UTC

                          I will prepare you now, the next chapters is almost finished and it's a very sad one, it explains some loose ends, but after that things will get better for Zell I promise! He wont get hurt anymore. Just bare with me alittle longer!!

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                          1. laddyuna on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:49PM UTC

                            Aaahhh...i fear the worst.
                            Well, if you put a good sex scene in this chapter i will forgive you...

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                            1. Cocoaba on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Aug 2017 11:55PM UTC

                              Yay thank you for forgiving me! I'll make it up! Seifer finally found Zell and he's not willing to give him up!

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