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  1. Cocoaba on Chapter 7 Sat 16 Sep 2017 05:59PM UTC

    You're welcome! It's the truth though! I became really inspired by your stories to try one for myself.

    1. (Is Selphie dead?) Nope she is alive and well. She just not in Irvine's life anymore.

    2. (Is Adonis or Macari the same or no?) Yes they are same person his full name is Adonis Macari.

    3.(Will Rinoa return?) Sadly she will not make a return. But, yes Zell gave his freedom for Rinoa's. So she's no longer in the program and Zell had to take her place. Don't worry more of this will be cleared up in the next chapter.

    4.(how did Zell hurt Elyse's baby?) While Zell was Being trained, Adonis played the ultimatum game. Zell had to pick between raping a child or Elyse getting a forced abortion of sorts. Zell couldn't hurt a child like that so he sacrificed his friends unborn baby. It's not his fault, but he feels guilty about this. In the next chapter before things get crazy, we'll be checking up on Zell.

    Don't worry if you can't understand! If this helps you understand English more than awesome! I'm helping! <3

    I know I sound like a broken record at this point, but I'll spoil just a bit for you. One whole chapter will be dedicated to Dr.Kadowaki and her punishment. I'm so excited for it too!!

    Thank you so much for appreciating my story! I love waking up to these complements!!

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    1. laddyuna on Chapter 7 Sat 16 Sep 2017 07:07PM UTC

      Ok! That makes sense now. Thanks for the explanations. I have to say that i'm a bit disapointed about Fujin's attitude but i understand her. She cheriches Seifer very much so i forgive her. I hope Seifer will blow this unfair system and will save everyone...
      Waiting for Kadowaki's death...:-D
      Always happy to read your work so thanks to you my dear.
      See you

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