The last part just killed me!!! I was literally covering my mouth when I read that... trying not to scream OMFG! And especially after what they did a few hours before, that was amazing! By the way, I love your writing style a lot.
The build up to the end of this chapter is really what drove me to continue writing this. I wrote so much of this story in such a short amount of time (I was obsessed), and it started all because I needed to get to this payoff.
Yep! Exactly! What they were doing a few hours before, and why Noctis was so out of sorts, and to think that Ignis knew exactly where he was going to be after his shift at Cauthess. (•̀o•́)ง
I'm so glad that it was as satisfying to you as it was to me as the writer. These are the kind of reviews every writer lives for. So, thank you so much for your wonderful review. ❤
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