This is absolutely perfect as a follow-up to the (frankly disturbing) adventure finale. I love how you got their voices exactly right, so much that I can't help reading the dialogue in the actual characters' voices; and as much as it is against doctor's orders for Cornelia - and probably for Sebastian as well - to be drinking alcohol, I'm so there for the two of them having that particular conversation, and finally putting aside their past differences. Cornelia's stubborness when it comes to getting out of bed and having a drink is so much in character for her, just as is Sebastian's bluntness and his growing sense of uneasiness about the entire ordeal.
Your writing is brilliant, and I adore all those little details you put in there - especially all the hints about Cornelia's past adventures, and the part where Dorothy has to come downstairs and chase them both back to bed. Thank you so much for sharing this story - I'll be looking forward to more of your work, if you happen to feel so inclined.
Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I had a might need for some decompressing after the finale, and it just seemed right for these two to enable each other’s ill-advised drinking. Glad it worked for you!
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