This is amazing! It's exactly what I + probably these characters needed to process that last traumatic adventure, a little moment of honesty and understated friendship. You really nailed their voices & general demeanours, it was very sweet & I laughed more than once at Cornelia & Sebastian being the awkward stubborn weirdos they are :P Your prose is great too, clear and concise while still leaving room for a creative kind of personal style that's very pleasant to read. I really hope you feel inspired to write more at some point, this was too good to stand alone!
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! I’m so glad the voices worked for you - it’s always a challenge taking on characters from the past, and ones with such distinctive voices too. Glad they worked for you :)
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