Oough this is damn incredible, origin stories for characters always seem to disappoint me but THIS is amazing and I friggin love it! You've written all of the characters sooo well and I love all of the relationships they have together. The fights Dice had against the casino staff honestly made me giddy whilst I read them because Dice is just...SO excited and cocky and i love it, often in stories people portray him as someone with a false sense of pride or a scaredy cat so its super refreshing to see him written how he SHOULD be and I'm excited to see what else you add on in the future. I read this is one sitting but honestly.... I need more ❤
I understand the appeal of a fallible Dice, but sometimes you just wanna go full throttle you know?? A showman whose got the skills to back it up, even when things go south for him. Go big or go home all the way!
I'm glad you loved those fights, they've had to be some of my favorite parts!
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Peacheenie on Chapter 11 Thu 19 Apr 2018 08:43PM UTC
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