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  1. DarkAngelGirl13 Thu 21 Jun 2018 03:33PM UTC

    Another awesome story or Thiam week. I love that they are newlyweds here. I could tell how much Theo didn't want it to be the 23rd. He didn't want to leave Liam's arms. How you started this with them waking up together was perfect. It was tender and sweet. The part with Liam feeling his lungs with Theo's scent gave a great visual of how he was needing to be surrounded by Theo in every layer of his body. The pictures that you painted in this was wonderful. I could visualize Theo not getting rid of Liam's cum by just letting it be absorbed in his body. My favorite parts are as followed and if I could give more than kudos once I would.

     

    “Give it to me.” Theo writhed against him, almost impaling himself but not using quite enough force, instead merely kissing Liam’s sensitive tip. “I’m still wet and slick inside.” He rocked side to side on the mattress. “I can feel your cum sloshing around.”

    Liam whimpered and tapped his cockhead against Theo’s opening. As a werewolf, Liam came a lot with every load, and as a chimera they could fuck as often and as hard as they wanted and Theo was never sore later. In fact, his ass healed and re-tightened so fast that if he didn’t get up and purge Liam’s deposit as soon as they finished, it would stay put until he voluntarily got rid of it or his body absorbed it. Accidental leakage wasn’t really a thing after the first few minutes.

     

    “Aww, yeah.” Theo bucked in his hand. “Fuck me, Liam.”

    “Soon,” Liam whispered. He sucked his index finger a second time before plunging it through Theo’s muscle ring. Fuck, he was very warm and wet inside, and as soon Liam penetrated him, the tangy-creamy musk of his cum wafted up his nostrils and filled his mind with images of the sex they had before their nap – and the three other times before that that he had bred Theo without him leaving the bed to shower or clean up. “God Theo, I swear there’s more of my cum inside you than inside me.”

    Theo nodded urgently and bounced on the bed. “That’s the way it oughta be.”

    I-I love you.”

    Liam’s heart swelled. After four years of dating and almost a week of marriage, Theo still said it with a shy uncertainty, like he thought Liam might not say it back.

    “I love you too,” he answered, stretching out over him and sealing their mouths together as he took long, lazy thrusts. He would always say it back, especially since he knew he was the only person Theo had said it to since before the Dread Doctors killed his family.

     

    Theo nodded and laid his head on Liam’s shoulder. “Yeah, but how about one more nap first?”

    “Theo,” Liam whined, his stomach rumbling now that he was thinking about food. “If we do that, we’re gonna fuck again, and then nap again. It’s a vicious cycle.”

    “Vicious, Liam, vicious.” Theo leaned up and kissed him before settling back in against his chest.

    Liam sighed and trailed tired fingers down Theo’s spine. He supposed a nap couldn’t hurt.

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    1. TVTime Fri 22 Jun 2018 01:24AM UTC

      Aww thanks! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this honeymoon themed Thiam Week story! I really enjoyed writing it. In fact I had a lot more fun with it than I was expecting! I was originally kinda torn on what I was going to write for this theme, but a honeymoon fic was my first idea, and I'm glad I stuck with it.

      I wasn't going to include any smut, but I just couldn't resist once I got going! I was originally going to make it just fluff though since smut takes me so much longer to write.

      Ah yeah, Theo and Liam definitely don't want it to be the 23rd! Haha, I picked that date because that's the day Thiam Week ends, so I thought it'd be fun if that was also the last day of their honeymoon in this fic!

      Yeah, I really think Liam's in his own little bit of heaven in this story and really just savoring being so wrapped up in Theo and inhaling his scent. I don't want to make all my stories the same in that regard, but I always enjoy having a werewolf/werecoyote/Theo have an emotional reaction to someone's scent. I figure scent's an important sense to them, so they're bound to react strongly and have an emotional connection to significant scents.

      LOL, I also always love to include some type of kink in my smut stories, and in this case I really enjoyed Theo being so full of Liam's cum and liking it so much!

      Ahh, thanks! I'm so happy you liked those parts! Those were some of my favorites too. Thanks a ton for the feedback :D

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      1. DarkAngelGirl13 Tue 26 Jun 2018 01:46PM UTC

        I really did because love them as dating or engaged, but married is the best of all. I am glad that you stuck with honeymoon theme as well. I had originally thought of putting Happy Daddy, Dad Day here, but was like no I want that for Father’s day so wrote the one about Buy Me Lunch Instead. I can see where this was a lot of fun. I love picturing them lying in bed together snuggling up like they were. I thought at first they were still linked together, which was defiantly hot. You had a lot of great stories for Thiam week for sure.

        I’m glad that you couldn’t resist because the smut was hot. The images I was getting in my head while reading this were wonderful. I love some fluff, but smut is always great add. It might have flowed cause your brain knew you were on a deadline so it didn’t take as long.

        That was a sad date even though knew had to come to an end. You could see how bad that they didn’t want it to be the 23rd. (side note how did you do the italics cause I’ve tried and never can get it to work)

        Liam really is and it shows how much they love each other. I love when the were-creatures/Theo have an emotional reaction to scents. I feel like it would fit because of them being just that were-creatures. Scent is for sure a huge thing to them since it can also save their lives. The emotional connections are my favorite when comes to scent though.

        I love kinks in your stories too. Especially when it comes to ass play and cum play. Theo loves Liam’s cum and it shows. So hot on that part too like fill me up all you want and I’m just going lay here and hold it in.

        You’re welcome on feed back. Another top notch story that I enjoyed reading. Defiantly some of the best parts.

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        1. TVTime Tue 26 Jun 2018 08:01PM UTC

          Ohh, I think Happy Daddy, Dad Day would have been great for this theme as well, but you're right it defintiely fit even better for Father's Day of course, and Buy Me Lunch Instead was such a great story! I'm so glad you wrote it too instead of using Happy Daddy, Dad Day for both or something!

          That's a good point. I think working to such a tight deadline did help me keep the smut, and other story aspects in general, more concise. It really kept me motivated to just keep going and finish in one day! LOL, like I said though, now I'm having a bit of a 'writing hangover' and just need a few days to recover!

          Yeah, there's something really sad about a vacation/honeymoon coming to a close like that! But at least in the story they still have 3 more days to just sleep and have sex and enjoy being together!

          If I'd had more time to do the smut, one thing I wanted to include was Liam bottoming for the first time. I hope if there's a future Thiam event I can incorporate something like that as a sequel!

          For the italics, when you're posting the story I think you'll see two options one for "HTML" and one for "Rich Text" and "HTML" is usually the one that's selected by default. So for the HTML option you can get the italics by using the HTML code, which is < then the letters em and then > in front of the words/sentence you want italicized, but then you have to close close the brackets after the last word/sentence you want italicized. To do that you type < then / and then em and >. I don't think it'll let me show you with the real < and > because it'll just read them as code in the comment, but if you pretend ( and ) are the < and > instead, it would look like this:

          (em)sentence you want in italics(/em)

          You can get stuff bold the same way but instead of em you'd just use b and /b, and there's no spaces in any of that for either the italics or the bold.

          If you use the "Rich Text" option when posting instead of the "HTML" then you can just copy and paste from a word document that has the formatting already, which seems easier...but I find it doesn't really work too well, and I always use the HTML instead of the Rich Text. The Rich Text almost always creates extra spaces between the paragraphs, and it still often messes up the formatting with the italics and runs stuff together or makes it display wrong.

          If you want to see the difference, I used to post Iron Claws with the Rich Text before I switched to HTML, and right now I'm going back and doing edits in general as well as updating it all to HTML. Anyway here's a chapter I haven't updated yet:

          Ch 17:
          https://ao3-rd-3.onrender.com/works/8091622/chapters/19464406

          And you'll see how there's all that extra space between paragraphs, plus down near the bottom where Isaac recalls Ethan's words about Aiden, "'I'm not you, Aiden. I don't kill people when they piss me off.'" in italics, there's an extra space that it added before the start of that section.

           

          Whereas my new chapter don't have that:

          Ch 61:
          https://ao3-rd-3.onrender.com/works/8091622/chapters/34336427

          That's so true! For werecreatures the heightened smell can be a life or death thing so it makes sense for it to carry so much significance to them and for the emotional connections of scents to be so meaningful!

          I have fun including that when I write from the were-creatures/Theo's POVs, although it is kinda fun to write it from a human's POV sometimes too to kind of contrast it.

          Thanks! I'm so happy that ass play and cum play kink was hot in this story! Haha, Liam and Theo definitely had a good time with it! I thought it would have been hot for Liam to bottom for the first time with Theo still being full of Liam's cum while he fucks him.

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