Comment on The World Will be Covered In Snow

1. raju1990 on Chapter 2 Fri 24 May 2019 07:08PM UTC

   

   good chapter.but in some places it appears to be rushed and if possible make chapter little lenghty,as for writing it is good.i am really enjoying this story. i will be waiting for the next update

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2. 1. WolfOfWar on Chapter 2 Fri 24 May 2019 07:30PM UTC

      

      Thank you for the advice. I'll try to follow....

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