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  1. StoryReigns96 on Chapter 1 Sun 19 Jan 2020 03:21PM UTC

    I appreciate that. Initially, I wasn't planning on showing the direct aftermath, as the scene was a last-minute addition, intended to simply show that Harry is discovered not to be a Squib early on, and not later after a normal childhood to prevent any confusion. I didn't want anyone to be surprised by the next chapter.

    However, now that you've brought it up, I do think it's a great segway and a nice vehicle to show the disconnect. So, I'm going to add either a short chapter between 1-2 to show the incident occurring in real-time, instead of alluding to it to later in Harry's life.

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    1. RainbowsForBreakfast on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Jan 2020 06:51AM UTC

      Oh wow, thanks. It means a lot to me that you would actually do that.

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