I just started reading more, and it's so good. I want to leave you proper comments and i will but i love their dynamic, and the characterization. Ghirahim pushed Link off skyloft but Link wasn't mad, god i cant explian the scene bc im tired but i could NOT stop grinning
I only dream of writing something this detailed and full of "show dont tell."
Thank you again for your hard work! I will leave better comments! Im abt halfway through.
Eyyyy, I'm finally making it to your comments! Ha ha, I remember getting this comment and feeling so inexplicably nervous that you were going to finish reading it and just kind of hate the rest of it XD So I'm glad that wasn't the case ;)
Thank you for all your feedback, and I'm sorry that I'm only just now getting to them! lol, and yeah, that was a scene that I absolutely HAD to preserve in the rewrite :D
Thats only fair bc i know every time i update im going to be afriad you suddenly hate mine x') ((please dont stress replying to my long comments)) ((i never shut up)) 💜
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