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  1. I_Bet_My_Life (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 24 Apr 2020 08:47AM UTC

    I love the writing style and the plot! I think the idea of Izuku with a water quirk is really out there and cool! I personally think that he shouldn't get One for All, because I feel like it might come across as forced, even if you do your very best at integrating it into the story. I also think that it may affect his relationship with others in the story because you end up following his canon personality instead of your own design, even if subconsciously. I don't know what your plans are for the entrance exam, but I hope that you won't force a relationship between Uraraka and Izuku, even if he saves her. Your writing style seems to flow well, and I would hate for you to push a relationship because of canon when you don't think it matches. All in all, I love your work, writing, plot, style, and the way you bring out the characters! I'll definitely keep an eye on this work. Love the fic, and I hope to read more soon!

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    1. GuardianOfTheLoaf on Chapter 1 Fri 24 Apr 2020 06:26PM UTC

      I am so glad that you liked it! With OFA, I will definitely keep that in mind! I will probably make a vote eventually to see what everyone prefers. I have a detailed plan for either way (　´∀｀)b

      And with Uraraka, no worries there. :D She isn't in the same battle center.

      Thank you so much for commenting and reading! I hope you're doing well :)

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