Comment on Christmas in Capital City

  1. BarbWireThong on Chapter 4 Sun 13 Dec 2020 10:38PM UTC

    Thanks again, Ramz. You are so very, very kind. I firmly believe that a writer should "show, not tell" how characters feel about one another, and since that's important to me, your compliment is really special.

    You know, now that I think about it, "show, not tell" your feelings is probably a good rule for life and story telling, yeah?

    Hope you're enjoying your holidays! And thanks once more.

    Last Edited Sun 13 Dec 2020 10:39PM UTC

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    1. Ramz on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Dec 2020 02:10AM UTC

      I think "show, not tell" is a GREAT way to explain what I enjoyed. Definitely a good rule for life as well! My holidays have been great, but this has made them greater. Thank you!

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      1. BarbWireThong on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Dec 2020 03:10AM UTC

        If I could take your compliments, print them up, and put them on a Christmas ornament, I think my tree would be perfect. :)

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        1. Ramz on Chapter 4 Thu 17 Dec 2020 03:32AM UTC

          Do it!!!!!! Laminate a print out! I love to spread cheer

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          1. BarbWireThong on Chapter 4 Fri 18 Dec 2020 04:56PM UTC

            You've already successfully spread cheer, Ramz...even before the expense of a lamination. Your kind words mean a lot to me.

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