Omg this was so lovely! I was crying!
I love Din's response to Reader's essentially proposing to him. The whole thing was just wonderful.
But I'm dying to know what "a better place" is. Are we meant to guess or do you plan a sequel? I have to assume the Child must be present. Oh, wait, it's Sorgan isn't it?
I have one suggestion. Maybe you should change the rating to "M" because you use the word "fuck" and even though it's very understated and non-explicit, there's still a bit of smut.
I enjoyed this story so much.
It was just about perfect.
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Sarasaturday13 Tue 16 Feb 2021 04:34AM UTC
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