yOU CAN TEACH ME TO BE GOOD WITH GIRLS OH N O THE POOR BOY.
Oh my gosh I kept wanting to take a sec to comment but your transitions are so good and your descriptions of emotion are so cAPTIVATING that I just kept reading and wow suddenly I was at the end of the chapter.
Can I take a sec to also gush about Langa's short circuiting brain??? Oh man poor boy is wHIPPED. And I am so here for it. Your pacing is also immaculate. You're just so good at this whole writing business and I am beyond excited to read the next chapter!
Aaahh this is such a sweet comment I’m so happy!! I’m so glad the emotion came across in this chapter, it’s one of the biggest things I’m working on improving. I loveeeee writing Langa being hopelessly in love with Reki, it’s my favorite headcanon haha. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! It really made my day ❤️❤️❤️
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