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  1. Radiance3Sun (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sun 30 May 2021 07:01AM UTC

    I found some additional errors I forgot to mention:

    *"Those words wouldn’t leave his mind even with the impeding death a few hours away. Thanos had won and now Tony was starring into the void of space." "Impeding" should be "impending" and "starring" should be "staring".
    *"His head laid against back of the chair." "The" is missing after "against".
    *"—redhead came to forefront of his mind as he tried to sleep." "The" is missing before "forefront".
    *"A light began glow in front of his eyes. Tony squinted see an orange glow coming toward the ship." "To" is missing before "glow", "see" should be "seeing", and there should be a comma after "squinted".
    *"Tony’s anger growing every second he looked at the star spangled jackass." "Growing" should be "grew".
    *"—shoved it to Rogers before his strength left him and he collapses onto the ground." "Collapses" should be "collapsed".
    *"Let go somewhere. Anywhere." "Let" should be "let's".
    *“This will be a good Tony. A place to heal and rest.” The "a" before "good" should be deleted.
    *"She love those sugar treats and thought—". "Love" should be "loved".
    *"He jumps over pulling his idol to his feet." "Jumps" should be "jumped".
    *"—Thor and Captain America trying to separate Thanos body from his head." "Thanos" needs an apostrophe: "Thanos'".
    *"The one they beat Thanos!" "Where" is missing after "one".
    *"—as the stones power made Peter scream in agony." "Stones" needs an apostrophe: "Stones'".

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