This was bloody awesome Krabby!! Your dialogue and mannerisms are so in-character and really believable to my head canon. I love feisty Judy, and the tension between her and V. You did a wonderful job of showing the loveable qualities of V and how she is slowly wearing Judy’s defences down. The stubbornness and determination was on point.
That scene in V's apartment with Nibbles was so damn cute! And showed yet another side to V. The whole thing played out like a movie in my head. Loved it!
And cheeky Evelyn, what's going on there hey? Judy better get over herself quick smart or someone is going to cut her lunch!
Great chapter Krabby! Can't wait to see what happens next and how they implement this grand plan to take over Clouds!
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MaddogLynch on Chapter 3 Mon 05 Jul 2021 03:05AM UTC
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