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  1. I am just one chapter in and I love everything about this fic. The pacing is great, and I love the out-of-joint storytelling. The order of the vignettes so far has been genius. 23 and 24 together in particular made my goddamn heart sing augh. 23 in general just ruined me, once i realized what had happened, and the contrast of the second use of the scepter in 24 man, just wow.

    This is awesome.

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    1. Thanks for your comment. It's always great to hear someone is enjoying. Those two scenes were the point at which I really figured out the direction I wanted to take the story in, so it's good to hear they had a lot of emotional impact. :)

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