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  1. vidrichka on Chapter 3 Fri 03 Sep 2021 09:47AM UTC

    this fanfic is just so good 🤌🏻💗 so far i love how you've written everything, the characterization of lance and keith and just about how much lance has changed with those 2 years!! it's such a mystery and i can't wait to see where you take this, I'm so excited ✨🥰 also lance sitting down to talk to keith only so he could stay in bed and sleep WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER PLSSJSK, i feel like lance hates himself for still loving and caring so much about keith even when he's convinced he's a spy and a clone. THE EMOTIONS IN THIS!! i love it all 💫

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    1. unsaidemry on Chapter 3 Fri 03 Sep 2021 12:37PM UTC

      This is so embarrassing to admit but I did the dumbest little dance when I read your comment cause of how happy it made me xD I'm so happy you love it so far!! Knowing that readers are excited to wait for the next update is what keeps me writing consistently and it means so much to me!! :') and yes!! There are some definite wars going on in Lance's head at the moment, because not only does he want to protect his current team from a potential threat, but he also doesn't want to hurt Keith because he might not be an enemy!! The ending scene for this chapter was my idea of what would push Lance over the edge, and I didn't mention it but it definitely hurt Lance to do that to Keith. He seems heartless on the outside but I'm so happy readers are empathizing with him because that's what I hope for when I upload!! :)) <3

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