Comment on My Reincarnation as Digital Being or it's Digital Demigodess? (Lewd Worm CYOA SI)

1. Talosar001 on Chapter 1 Fri 22 Oct 2021 10:22PM UTC

   

   The story has potential but the grammar is shit.

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2. 1. The_Pillow on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Oct 2021 01:57AM UTC

      

      I second this

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   2. goku90504 on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Oct 2021 04:05AM UTC

      

      I wouldn't be so insulting as to call it shit but yea the grammar needs serious work to make the story more readable

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