I don't know how to say how lovely this was, but it was so visceral and descriptive without being overly-porny. It stayed in the 'beautiful' category without moving over to 'raunchy' and that's such a hard line to straddle when writing this stuff (I know that first hand), so really, brav-fucking-o. There's not anything I didn't just love about this, but especially this paragraph:
"The smile is stuck on his face and he can't get it off, and he knows it must look cheeky, but well. Knowing that he drives Sam just as wild as Sam does with him, knowing all of his fucked-up passion and devotion is completely and equally requited... there's nothing like that. He can't help but feel a bit smug that he and Sam have the best fucking love in the whole world, no contest. No one comes anywhere within the galaxy of close. Sam is too perfect, as a partner and as a little brother and as a best friend, and he knows first hand Sam worships him, too."
i was happy-sighing all over the place. excellent stuff. xoxox
Oh, wow!!! Thank you so much for sending this! It's always the loveliest thing to have such an in-depth response to something in your inbox, and you are beyond kind for writing this up <3 I'm really glad you liked it, I appreciate it.
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