Comment on Auras Part 3

  1. Lilie_lect (Guest) on Chapter 31 Fri 10 Dec 2021 11:21AM UTC

    I apologize for my previous comment in French. With the useful google translator for this website, I read your story directly in my native language to make the most of your story that I forgot that the original one was not French :)!! I will do it in English this time!

    Wow, I didn't realize that it was only 4 weeks!! We are so caught up in the story and their feelings that time seems go by faster.

    I really want to thank you for your reply and your comment on the relationship between John&Evan.
    I fully understand your point of view on their military constraint which is reflected very well in your story. I agree that it would be a shame to go too fast in their interactions. I have to admit that my favorite thing about their relationship is precisely that they can't say/show their feelings for each other. This makes their interactions all more intense. I love the start of chapter 1 when they get the garden for Adi and John takes the opportunity to whatch him and how he remembers it later. Or in chapter 19 when John walks into Evan's room when he's just getting out the shower and John can't help but watching. I really appreciate your ability to show us these emotions in such intense way in just a few words.
    I fully love how you deal with these two characters. Even in your other stories like "it started with an Ancient device..." (I love so much this story! This is my favorite with Auras). You communicate their feelings to us so easily. I really appreciate that.

    I trust you completely for the rest of the story. I can't wait to know the rest. How things are going between John&Evan and Adi of course :)

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    1. Ani272 on Chapter 31 Sat 11 Dec 2021 11:51AM UTC

      Oh! "It started with an Ancient device..." is one of my favourites too! I'm so glad you like that one.

      I'm looking forward to writing John and Evan's continuing story... they wouldn't ever have acted on their attraction of course, but with Adi in the mix, it will surely work out for them all 😊

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