Comment on The Cold Truth

  1. solitariusvirtus

    What?

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    1. That vampire!Cinderella AU I've got in mind.

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      1. solitariusvirtus

        Ah.

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        1. We could talk more about it.

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          1. solitariusvirtus

            Sure

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            1. Right, so there we have Ella (Cinderella) and Nick. She's actually his half-sister, kidnapped by a human family and (temporarily) stripped of her bloodlust.

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              1. solitariusvirtus

                This sounds interesting but you should craft some plausible explanations unless you want it to come across as half-baked.

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                1. How do you mean?

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                  1. solitariusvirtus

                    How would one go about stripping a vampire(?) of blood lust?

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                    1. Magic.

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                      1. solitariusvirtus

                        That's the problem - magic is a very loose concept. You have to explain things or it will seem lazy.

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                        1. Any ideas?

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                          1. solitariusvirtus

                            Maybe a charmed amulet.

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                            1. That's a good idea.

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                              1. solitariusvirtus

                                But you should still lay out the ground rules.

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                                1. Same rules I explained for the other story.

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                                  1. solitariusvirtus

                                    That's a bit sketchy. Considering you're going for your own world. More details.

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                                    1. Well, in Arcadia, royals are allowed to marry for love (and there's plenty of inbreeding and incest, but the bride has to consent, obviously).

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                                      1. solitariusvirtus

                                        ...Love?

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                                        1. Yeah.

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                                          1. solitariusvirtus

                                            Hmm. In a medieval world that does not work.

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                                            1. So what does?

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                                              1. solitariusvirtus

                                                Can we please move this to the next chap and I'll give you a few links and expos.

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                                                1. Okay.

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                                                  1. solitariusvirtus

                                                    Danke. :D

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