Oh and by the bye, feel free to tell me if you notice any mistakes! I always proofread once before posting, but I'm gonna miss some mistakes. I'm especially paranoid about speech mannerisms (things like how Grace always writes numbers by their words: four instead of 4, while other characters sometimes switch but usually use the number itself) and accuracy (did Toriel know that Chara killed herself on purpose? Did Asgore think Toriel died of a broken heart or otherwise when she left or does he know she ran away? Is Chara reacting to things realistically?), but if I misspelled a word (I frequently type 'form' when I'm trying to write 'from'), I'd like to know so I can fix it. Basically, I appreciate and like feedback, as long as it's respectful! Thank you so much for reading thus far!
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Elsa_Elric01 on Chapter 6 Tue 05 Apr 2022 05:47AM UTC
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