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  1. Moss_Alchemist on Chapter 1 Wed 06 Apr 2022 11:07AM UTC

    ashddnie you just nailed all the things i was flustering over how good they were written.

    "I find his smiles to be quite beautiful." ooofff stars, this thing is so adorable <3

    but then there's always the gnawing questions/anticipations, like, the world will /never/ accept Sarel and that lead to a train thought of a scenario where Aiden has a secluded cottage or something and he leaves to get neccessities one day and arrives to find Sarel hurt because someone thought that he was nothing more than a monster.
    Bonus hurt if the person who hypothetically would hurt Sarel to still be there when Aiden arrives, confused as oblivion as to why this horrid thing would speak or dress as a person?

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    1. Thanatopsiturvy on Chapter 1 Thu 07 Apr 2022 05:10PM UTC

      and that lead to a train thought of a scenario where Aiden has a secluded cottage or something and he leaves to get neccessities one day and arrives to find Sarel hurt because someone thought that he was nothing more than a monster.

      THE PAIN. AUGH. But yes! These are definitely places my own mind went as well when thinking about the ramifications of what bringing Sarel into "civilized" society would mean. It's very messy.

      So glad you're enjoying the story so far!

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