I really enjoyed this. I love the way you weave between the scenes of the movie, and the description of Abigail first seeing Tallie “small and swift in the distance” is particularly nicely done. “Every time she leaves I feel as if I shall never see her again and every time she reappears it feels like I’m seeing her with new eyes.” I like it!
Shorts! Ah! Thank you so much. I admire your writing an incredible amount, I am so glad you liked this. I honestly think you're one of the most talented writers on here (you write like my wife does and she's published!) Fics like yours, as well as all the lovely feedback encourages me to keep on. I haven't written for a long time and am never sure if I am any good (I'm a published poetry, not a fiction writer, and I always tell my wife I've "got no fingers for fiction"). Thanks again for this comment!
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