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  1. MelissaMoonlight on Chapter 1 Sat 11 Jun 2022 04:09AM UTC

    Genesis Rhapsodos casting Firaga with his black wing fully expanded standing under a dark clouded sky.

    Wow! That beginning is brilliant! I love the way you write! The idea of Bakzea doing mysterious things is interesting! And I totally love the relaxed atmosphere of Atem's and Kaibas meetings.

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    1. offbeatBeauty on Chapter 1 Tue 14 Jun 2022 01:05AM UTC

      Oh thank you! I'm actually going to be going through this fic and editing it and giving some touch ups to certain parts. It needs some love since I haven't touched it in awhile ^^'

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