The physical pain and hunger feel very real! I liked Grian's confusion over Tango tagging along because that does feel like a confusion he'd have, and it mirrored my question as the reader. Also the setup of Grian being like "ah, I see, you don't trust me" vs everyone else being Absolutely Horrified on his behalf is So Good.
I LOVE whump and angst but a fair bit of it (esp centering Grian) is of.. shall we say, mixed quality. This RULES. I hope you keep indulging whatever corner of your brain prompted this, bc this premise and the writing style supporting it kick ass. I really really love this, and I can't wait to read more!!
Oh gosh this is such a sweet comment 🥺🥺🥺🥺 i'll admit i was SO nervous about posting this because i was concerned about the quality (the polished writing on my main is MUCH more carefully thought out than this, which is essentially just me throwing shit on the page and calling it a day) and whether it would Hit Right, yknow??? So hearing that you (and the other folks who have commented) found this good makes me very very relieved to hear!!!
I will absolutely continue indulging with this au!!! Ive got some shameless enablers and a lot of people seem interested in the worldbuilding ive been doing, so i have no plans of stopping anytime soon :] im super excited to keep writing for this!!!
(Also, if you like this writing style, you should check out the hermitcraft works on my main acct, definitelynotshouting-- those are what i consider fully edited and polished, and im incredibly proud of the writing style used for them. Thank you so much again for commenting!! :D )
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heartbeatsinreverse on Chapter 1 Tue 28 Feb 2023 12:22AM UTC
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definitelynotaroughdraft (definitelynotshouting) on Chapter 1 Tue 28 Feb 2023 01:49AM UTC
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