Comment on lost in the dark (he's got a heavy heart)

  1. antimony_medusa on Chapter 1 Tue 28 Feb 2023 04:13AM UTC

    “It makes sense the Hermits would want revenge, that blacklisting him hadn't been enough. They're good people, and he's dangerous. Something like him shouldn't be allowed to roam the world.”
    oh buddy

    “His heart pangs at the thought: it's been so long since he's thought about his past as a player, as a person. In all technicality, that title has never even belonged to him; he was born of copied code and implanted memories, a parasite that shredded its host on the way out.”
    AHHHHHHHH

    “He's distantly curious about Tango, though. Would've figured Bdubs or Cleo would be here instead, thirsty for revenge. He remembers their disgusted fury, the boiling fear in both their eyes as they regarded him in a new, hideous light they had every right to flinch from.”
AHHHHHHH

    “"Grian?" Mumbo's voice is sharp. "Hey now, you– come on, open your eyes, alright? Don't be a spoon about this, please. You're not– come on. Eyes open. Grian, listen to me.””
    mumbo you goober
    “He sinks, dribbling into the abyss like molasses from a bottle. The darkness consumes him. He does not dream”
    AHHHHHHHHHH

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    1. definitelynotaroughdraft (definitelynotshouting) on Chapter 1 Tue 28 Feb 2023 04:48AM UTC

      >:] hello medusa beloved im so glad u are enjoying the Pain Train >:]

      Im glad you picked out that little line about Grian's past and the hints i left about it!! Its subtle but its there!!!! :D

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