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  1. greenbeanssssss on Chapter 2 Wed 26 Apr 2023 11:22AM UTC

    im im im im so normal about this chapter
    so good
    my heart ached at that moment when he yearns to know what alex is dreaming of i ARHGHG

    god i was hoping that randall (real randall) had known hob through the war and HELL YEAH i lOVE THIS i love the compliCATIONS it is forecasting im CHEWING im EATING

    Robbie clicks his tongue and bumps their shoulders together. “Don’t be daft. Of course you’ll always have a friend in me. I wouldn’t want you to be lonely.”
    Something about these exact words sends a powerful shiver through Randall. His breath hitches and he quickly looks away to stare at the birch trees instead. “Thanks.”
    LICHRALLY SHRIEKING, LOVE

    That night, Randall dreams of a smoky tavern and his oldest friend sitting across him with a shaggy beard and wild, long hair.
    FROTHING

    CORINTHIAN???? AAAAAAAAAA

    “Yeah?” Robbie’s hand stills, but he doesn’t remove it from Randall’s hair.
    “Of course. Means I get to keep you, old friend.”
    This time Robbie flinches, and pulls away to stare right into his face.
    “Randall?” his friend asks in a shaky voice.
    “Hmm?” Suddenly languid and calm, Randall leans back into his friend and tucks his head under Robbie’s chin. Robbie has always been a tall bastard. “You’re very comfortable.”
    The fingers are back in his hair. “Sorry, I thought… I thought I heard something. Don’t worry about me.”
    iM GOING BONKERS

    tALKiNG ABOUT THEIR SONS??? i cannot get over how well you are weaving together randall and dream’s identities. the ways in which dream surfaces.

    ookokokok the way he says hob but randall only knows him as robbie AAAA

    Randall Burgess is not a sodomite, but he can be a lover. He can be Robert Gale’s lover, his friend, his confidante. Randall Burgess knows his name is nothing but a command from his father and a supplication from his brother. But from Robbie, his name is a promise.
    Long hours after his father does tire and the door to the cellar is locked, Randall decides — through the spells and compulsions that haven’t yet faded to his subconscious — that he’ll be anything Robbie promises him he can be.

    in conclusion, going insane. this is wonderful <3 <3

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    1. BlueSundayCake on Chapter 2 Fri 28 Apr 2023 04:25AM UTC

      soooo sosososo happy to enable the feral insanity 💜💜💜💜 I love when readers quote bits back at me and scream, my gosh!!!!

      I'm honestly so excited to see you picking up on the little bits of Dream surfacing and enjoying them. It's such a delicate balance, to keep "Randall" real as himself, but also as a very light shadow of Dream on occasion. So this fills my heart with absolute joy.

      Thank you sooooo much for reading & commenting, hope you enjoy what comes next too!! 💜💜💜

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