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  1. bluesunnie Thu 24 Aug 2023 10:58PM UTC

    k, you are such an incredible writer ;-; this was so good i wanna shed a tear???? like i wish i could write something eloquent but honestly i am so dumbfounded. this was such a beautiful beautiful piece let me try to take out parts that i really like !!!

    ok first off, the start with sunghoon just skating, you make it sound like MAGIC. and that line when jungwon compares his own skating skills as, "He's not one who can mark a surface like that, tracing it with excellence instead of amateur attempts at scribbles–he can’t" it's so!!!! GOD i loved it so much!! u are so cool

    and honestly i just loveeee how u maintained the snow, frost, ice, and winter motifs all throughout (but when sunghoon says he likes his kitten and suddenly it's spring??? genius. absolute genius). hoonie an ice prince through and through he is so gorgeous i am so sad

    AND CAN I JUST SAY. "Kitten... don't tease" => STOP. i died. I DIED. Kitten!!!! oh my god

    i want to give jungwon a hug honestly, like him constantly battling with his thoughts of how he and sunghoon are boyfriends is he being too mischievous like baby nooo shush let me hug u :((( i love him, but i love how hoon easily grounds him. i love them.

    overall, such a good read. it must have been so hard getting past your slump, but this is a more than great contribution! so so proud of you, and don't worry this wasn't too sugary! reading this was a delight 🤍

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    1. selenyst Fri 25 Aug 2023 04:14AM UTC

      I--thank you so SO much?!?! T__Tfor reading and for leaving a comment, it truly means the world!<3

      I am glad Sunghoon on ice sounds like magic, that's really how I see him so I am glad it actually was conveyed like that! If I can at least make it sound just a bit like what he actually is capable of doing then I'm super glad TT!!

      I really wanted him to sound like what he is, an ice prince so Iwanted it to feel like it's his kingdom <3 and together, spring and love indeed.

      i NEEDED TO MAKE HIM CALL WON 'KITTEN' I COULD NOT RESIST!!!

      won deserves a hug yes, stress got him overthinking a little.

      I am glad it was a good read! It was truly difficult to fight that slump tbh, but glad that I managed to sit down and just, push through somehow to finish since I had already started. Thank you so much :( 💜💜💜

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