Comment on Harry Potter and The Friend He Never Had

  1. Doctor_Alchemy on Chapter 7 Sun 24 Dec 2023 04:29AM UTC

    Thank you..
    This is my first ever fanfiction, and I've been working on it for more than 2 and a half years..
    I've received a few reviews that my "first year" worth of story is a little confusing, raw and can be rewritten, while the story improves a lot post that..

    I'm personally not a fan of rewriting things.. So, I may never do that.. This story is in its last legs, only about 20% of the story is left..

    Hope you find some time to read ahead.. and if you do, let me know your thoughts.. Appreciate it!!

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    1. Toolazytologin (Guest) on Chapter 7 Sun 24 Dec 2023 04:45AM UTC

      I've got 50odd tabs open with fanfics open (including yours) so I'll get to it.

      I generally read a story until my brain screams "enough of this, find something else" which means the story that is being read at the time drops into a morose, angsty bullshittery tone and stays there for too damn long.

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      1. Doctor_Alchemy on Chapter 7 Sun 24 Dec 2023 05:33AM UTC

        Haha, I know that feeling

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    3. Toolazytologin (Guest) on Chapter 7 Sun 24 Dec 2023 04:51AM UTC

      Just skimmed through the other comments in this fic, it's safe to say that I'll be starting this again.

      Found a few spoilers amongst the comments, which is why I never read through comments on ffn as they're not locked to their respective chapters.

      It'll be interesting to see how you managed to steer through the quagmire that's indicated by the comment(s) of chapter 55. But that's for when I eventually get there.

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      1. Doctor_Alchemy on Chapter 7 Sun 24 Dec 2023 05:36AM UTC

        Oh boy.. Well, I'll be looking forward to your comments 😊

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