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  1. I did and I got 75% xD Just defense and I'll have that goddamn BEng and then I'll apply for masters I guess.

    Anyway "possibly horrible decision"? How dare you Bells 💀 This is the BEST decision and u were totally supposed to do that

    Is Jessica in love or just nosy? God please don't let it be a crush, she's annoying enough as is.

    There were some spellings this chapter but it was just as lovely as ever. I like Bells trying to stir the pot and stir it hard.

    Love triangles are kind of a basic trope but there can be a lot of fun stuff built around them. I honestly don't get why so many people dislike them so much.

    Also I was totally up for some Cullen family drama (between Alice and Jasper) but it seems like he's not mad at her in the slightest? I wonder what she said to appease him.

    I honestly admire the speed at which you write so much without declining in story queality. I've never been able to write stories that didn't feel rushed and without-depth (can you say plot is flat in English? XD). The only thing I am able to write is code 😭

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    1. There were spelling errors? Crap, I'll have to go over it and check.

      Also, 75% ?! Are you secretly a genius? How much knowledge does that brain possess?

      Jessica's just nosy asf, though she definitely thinks he's hot; everybody does. And yeah I agree, sometimes love triangles can really make a story, but because Bellamy and Jasper are basically soulmates, I think it's weird for Bellamy to have feelings for somebody else. With Bella, it's easier because she's not actually mates with Edward, they just fell in love quickly, so it's easier for her to fall for Jacob than it would be for Bellamy to fall for Lucas.

      Also, let's be honest. Nobody in the Cullen family can ever stay mad with Alice, it's Alice. She's an adorable sweetheart. But I don't think I write fast, I think I'm pretty slow actually, takes me 1-5 days sometimes to finish a chapter. (I can't write code for shit, so I for one think you're amazing)

      Would you like the next chapter now? Or later, because I finished it yesterday, but I don't know if I should wait to upload it just yet.

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      1. It's most often repeating words like "He understood that he understood that Edward just wanted to help, but he was going about it all wrong and he was sick of seeing Edward fuck up."

        I kind of wanted to have above 80% but at the same time so much of the university curriculum is just something I don't and Propably won't ever use at work which is OK. They give us a lot of options and we can choose what carrier well choose 😌

        Yeah it would be weird, valid point.

        She is adorable but I would feel kind of irritated if she went behind my back to push for her desired future. On the other hand I know some people I can't really get mad with so I totally get it.

        For me finishing chapters like that would take way longer, so I think it is pretty fast. Especially considering that the story feels captivating as does your style. It's one thing to just write fast and another to write fast and good.

        And I'm always up for another chapter 😅 It's just so fun to read and I have lots of free time now.

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